Things to change in Coursework

Allow the music to continue playing even when Kanye walks in and say what's that smell. Accepted.
Re-film all scenes that are in front of the yellow sign, hand wash and bench to make it look more professional. Accepted.
Make it shorter. Accepted.
Music change?? Joseph Joestar's Theme Overdrive OST  Rejected.
Film a scene of Kanye actually catching the body spray as a extreme close up. Accepted.
Pack shot of feet moving out of focus with focus on the body spray in front. Accepted.
Make dancing scenes much faster with more cuts and camera movement to make it more interesting. Accepted.

Feedback:
Dancing shots need movement + pace to editing.

Skip to 2:00 ~ Dancing reference

Add a voiceover, one voice saying Fragrare and then whole cast saying 'Let your fragrance dance'.
Add hashtag
More professional text for the title and slogan
Film in front of the mirror put it at an angle to avoid camera showing up in the mirror
Completely clean up the ending
Work on volume for both speech and music
Get Lemmy to send a recording of him saying, 'No, my bus!' then edit it in when he misses it.